the graph shows goods transport in the UK(1974-2002)

the graph shows goods transport in the UK(1974-2002)
The amount of
goods
transported by four separate modes of transport, namely road,
water
, rail and
pipeline
in the UK over a 28-year period from 1974 to 2002 is shown in the line graph, measured in
million
stones.
Overall
, the highest amount of
goods
was
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were
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transported via roadway
whereas
pipeline
remained the least commonly used mode of shipping over the entire period.
Although
there were some fluctuations, transport by road,
water
and
pipeline
showed an upward trend
while
/
whereas
transportation via rail reduced for a
while
before returning to the same levels. In 1974, around 70
million
tonnes
of
goods
were transported by road and
this
quantity rose to about 100
million
tonnes
towards the end of the span.
Pipeline
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The pipeline
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transported 5
million
tonnes
of
goods
in 1974.
This
figure increased steadily over the years and in 2002, about 20
million
tonnes
of
goods
were transported using
this
means. Both
water
and railways transported about 40
much
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tonnes
of
goods
in 1974 and that capacity remained more or less the same over the
next
four years. Afterwards, transport by
water ways
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waterways
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rose,
whereas
transportation by railways declined. During the period from 1986 to 1994, waterways transported around 60
million
tonnes
of
goods
.
This
quantity declined to around 50
million
tonnes
in 1998 and rose to about 65
million
tonnes
over the
next
four years.
By contrast
,
quantity
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the quantity
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of transportation by rail declined to 30
million
tonnes
in 1984 and showed fluctuations until 1998 before rising again to 40
million
tonnes
in 2002.
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