the graph shows goods transport in the UK(1974-2002)
The amount of
goods
transported by four separate modes of transport, namely road, water
, rail and pipeline
in the UK over a 28-year period from 1974 to 2002 is shown in the line graph, measured in million
stones.
Overall
, the highest amount of goods
was
transported via roadway Change the verb form
were
whereas
pipeline
remained the least commonly used mode of shipping over the entire period. Although
there were some fluctuations, transport by road, water
and pipeline
showed an upward trend while
/whereas
transportation via rail reduced for a while
before returning to the same levels. In 1974, around 70 million
tonnes
of goods
were transported by road and this
quantity rose to about 100 million
tonnes
towards the end of the span.
Pipeline
transported 5 Correct article usage
The pipeline
million
tonnes
of goods
in 1974. This
figure increased steadily over the years and in 2002, about 20 million
tonnes
of goods
were transported using this
means. Both water
and railways transported about 40 much
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tonnes
of goods
in 1974 and that capacity remained more or less the same over the next
four years. Afterwards, transport by water ways
rose, Correct your spelling
waterways
whereas
transportation by railways declined. During the period from 1986 to 1994, waterways transported around 60 million
tonnes
of goods
. This
quantity declined to around 50 million
tonnes
in 1998 and rose to about 65 million
tonnes
over the next
four years.
By contrast
, quantity
of transportation by rail declined to 30 Add an article
the quantity
a quantity
million
tonnes
in 1984 and showed fluctuations until 1998 before rising again to 40 million
tonnes
in 2002.Submitted by nguyenmaixk2 on
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