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‘Most high level jobs are done by men. Should the government encourage a certain percentage of these jobs to be reserved for women?”

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There are more men with high
level
 jobs in comparison with women with high
level
 jobs. Many people think that the government should reserve a certain percentage of these jobs for women. In my opinion, I don’t agree with them.
First
 of all I would like to say that there should be equal rights and opportunities for men and women. Men and woman are
equal so
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equal, so
 women should not get special attention.
Second
 of
all I
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all, I
 would like to say that companies
can not
can not
cannot
 be sure that the reserved high
level
 jobs will be
applicated
bend or turn backward
replicated
 by suitable women.
On the other hand
, Education? In
conclusion I
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conclusion, I
 think that the government should not encourage a certain percentage of high
level
 jobs to be reserved for women. My arguments are that there should be equal rights and opportunities and that it is not sure that those jobs will be
applicated
bend or turn backward
replicated
 by suitable women.

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