Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the young people. why is that the cause? Should they be encouraged to utilise their free time in a better way?

It has been observed that living in

era

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an era

the era

of

modernisation

making modern in appearance or behavior

modernization

and advanced society it is difficult to avoid shopping apart from purchasing basic needs.Due to

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millionials

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millennial

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have indulged in buying new items to

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an extent that it has become their

favorite

something regarded with special favor or liking

favourite

hobby.

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the following paragraphs I will shed some light on the cause of

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nature of

youngters

a young person of either sex

youngsters

and will discuss on how to educate them to divert their mind on other activities

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with, the main cause of

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habit is the media

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What

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mean by

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is that if any celebrity uses any new product or clothes it becomes a fashion and

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our younger generation considers it

a

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an

upcoming trend resulting in spending lots of

money

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, the

maintaince

activity involved in maintaining something in good working order

maintenance

of status in the society.To explain it

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lets

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let's

take an example of branded items in the

market which

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market, which

becomes a status symbol

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of

an individual.If any person is not having any branded item he is thrown into a low class category

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flooding of the market with various products of same

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function, but

with different looks which attract the younger crowd like phones, laptops

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designer wears.

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to

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the most common reason is the free flow of

money

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provided by the parents who are more involved in their work than to pay attention to their

kids

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kids'

habits

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, young people should be encouraged to invest their energy,

money

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and time on other activities like fitness, applying for additional courses related to their education.

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will not only help them to grow physically and mentally stronger, but help their country to develop

more economically

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more economic

more economical

and technologically.

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, they can invest their

money

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on their self development which will help them raising to higher limits. To conclude

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we should maintain a discipline in life when it comes to shopping

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There

is no denying the fact that

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the world

is full of various

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products, but

it is our responsibility to decide what is essential for us.Following

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habit will bring stability and peace in our life.