The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.
The given bar graph gives information about how often
people
in the USA eat in fast food restaurants by proportions over 10-year
period.
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a 10-year
Overall
, it is clear that
Americans
preferred to eat fast foods
once a week or once or twice a month the most. Fix the agreement mistake
food
This
trend saw fluctuations from 2003 to 2013. On the other hand
, the lowest points in the graph were every day and never. These habits were stable over 10 years
.
Just under the
5% of Correct article usage
apply
Americans
ate fast foods
every day in 2003 and this
dropped slightly in 2006, by
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in
following
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the following
years
remained stable. Nearly one in five people
in America preferred to eat fast foods
every other day in 2003. By 2006 Fix the agreement mistake
food
this
trend rose modestly to exactly 20% and then
saw a gentle decrease by
5%. Totally, the most chosen eating fast food habit by Change preposition
of
Americans
is only once a week. While
this
increased slightly from 2003 to 2006, it saw a remarkable decline in 2013 by almost 10%.
One
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One-third
third
of Americans
ate fast foods
rarely. Although
this
habit decreased gradually between 2003 and 2003, there was a sharp rise in 2013 by roughly 15%. The proportion of people
who ate fast foods
a few times a year was just under 15% in 2003 and Fix the agreement mistake
food
this
habit increased slightly to 15%, by
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in
following
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the following
years
it maintained steady. People
who never ate in fast food restaurants was 5% in 2003, the following next
years
, this
trend fell slightly and stayed stable.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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