SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT CHILDREN'S LEISURE ACTIVITIES MUST BE EDUCATIONAL, OTHERWISE THEY ARE A COMPLETE WASTE OF TIME. DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?
School students spend almost a quarter of their day in classrooms, studying and learning new things, and
hence
it is at most necessary for them to have a time
-off from their tuitions and spend on other activities. According to a few, this
time
would be better spent if they are made to perform leisure
activities which are educational in nature such
as reading books or solving puzzles or riddles. However
, making the children perform outdoor activities like playing field games or dancing would benefit much more as it would help in their overall development
.
On one hand, people believe that, since the child
's brain is in its early stages of development
, it is beneficial if they spend their free time
doing activities which would boost the brain's development
. Activities such
as playing educational games like solving puzzles or riddles or reading a story book etc. Such
activities help develop their minds as it enables them to learn new things outside the school. As a result
, having an educational
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educational, leisure
leisure
time
is quite effective for children to learn, however
the physical development
of the child
's body is also
equally important.
Pupils often spend most of their time
in institutes, learning and if they are made to do the same thing in their free time
, it would have a negative impact on their health. Due to this
, many experts suggest that children must spend time
playing outdoors, like on the swings or on slides. As this
helps their body to be physically stronger. Also
other indoor activities like painting, dancing etc. Too helps in the child
's cognitive development
and makes them more creative in their work. As per a recent study conducted by the Cambridge, the group of children which were allowed to play outdoors outperformed, the group who was made to perform informative tasks during their leisure
time
, in their grade exams. Hence
, children must be allowed to play and pursue their hobbies like painting, singing, dancing etc. as
it plays a very important role in their overall Suggestion
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development
.
In summary, although
leisure
activities of an informative nature, helps the student to better develop their cognitive abilities, the benefits of non-educational activities, outweighs it. The advanatages
of allowing students to play outdoors and pursue their hobbies helps not only in their brain the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantages
advantage
development but
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development, but
also
makes them fit thus
benefitting the child
mentally as well as physically.Submitted by mandar.pawaskar27 on
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