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Nowadays more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the solutions for this problem?

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In recent decades, childbearing in older ages have become the main problem for many governments.
Although
 many people agree with
this
 statement, but it is undeniable,
this
 type of lifestyle could have serious effects both for mothers and societies. Financial stability and keep the job from parents play a major part of
this
 problem. Financial stability is definitely a factor for
this
 anomaly. Many parents love to grow their children in a proper way and prepare them a brighter future, turn them to a more successful person who is beneficial for society. It is undeniable that, the necessity factor for
this
 type of thinking is
financial one
Suggestion
a financial one
financially one
the financial one
financing one
.
Also
 big segment of couples tend to defer children in
favor
promote over another
favour
 of career. Not only do couples love to have
job
Suggestion
a job
the job
 and prepare a brighter future for themselves, but
also
 every each child need some budget to
born
Suggestion
bear
 and rise. The main remedy comes from governments. By subsidiary budget put aside from governments, couples might
relieved
Suggestion
relieve
 from financial part and focus on their role as a parent. To be more specific, parents no need to have concerns about education or nutrition of their child by government support.
Moreover
, authorities have the power to ease and relax the regulation for maternity leave. It
is saw
Suggestion
is seen
has seen
sees
is seeing
 that, in big number of countries, corporate fired couples who become parents in case they do not force to paid leave and
also
 have
full time employee
Suggestion
a full time employee
. From what has been discussed and in order to draw conclusion, it is true that parents love to prepare a proper life both for themselves and their children, so if governments want to decrease the age of maternity;
hence
 supporting from governments is needed. The more support from governments, the more rate of birth in lower ages will be.

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