In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.

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Nowadays, some people think young generation should have a gap
year
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before the
enter
constituting the full quantity or extent; complete
entire
university
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Both the advantages and disadvantages of
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trend will be discussed in the essay below. It can be seen that students have a break before attending
university
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has some noteworthy positive effects. Young people spent a long
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for studying from elementary to high school, and even
time
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for studying is more than
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for relaxing. Their main mission only focuses knowledge, so they did not have other experience of life. In my opinion, after high school, they can do something what they like
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as playing instruments, taking part in a club, learning some skills and so on.
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, they should go travelling or find jobs. When people travel many places, they will have more and more knowledge about cultural and traditional, even they gain a lot of value.
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, when I was a child, I just heard a myth about Son Tinh and Thuy Tinh, in which Son Tinh arrived
first
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, married My Nuong princess and took her back to Tan Vien mountains where he lived. I thought that Tan Vien mountain
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also is
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has also been
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unofficially
until I came there and I knew I were wrong. During that trip, I gained knowledge which I did not know before
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as history about the mountain and the god, seeing artefact from a thousand
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years
ago and so on.
On the other hand
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, there are some negatives to affect people. If they have a gap
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, it is too long
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, students will delay their schedules or
plan
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plans
. Sometimes they have
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time
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to
break long-term, some people will lazy or will never return to their academy.
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, in the break
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, they find a job and can earn more money. Some people think they have money that why they must go to
university
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, so they decide to stop studying and continue to do their work. In the life, there are many traps
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as social evils, drugs, wines, and so on. In conclusion, the trend in some countries that young generation should travel for a
year
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after they finished their high school and before starting
university
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. The advantages are relaxing after studying and travelling many places or finding jobs, while the drawbacks are having a gap
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and maybe never return to
university
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.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Life experience
  • Work ethic
  • Career readiness
  • Self-discovery
  • Delayed gratification
  • Intellectual stagnation
  • Financial implications
  • Social dynamics
  • Academic trajectory
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