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It is generally believed that the Internet is an excellent means of communication but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to find information. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Nowadays, all of us become obsessed with the
internet
 whatever our ages are. We use the
internet
 on our mobile phones, our laptops, tablets, and nearly all our devices. So, it becomes an essential part of our
days
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day
, but the purposes of using the
internet
 differ from a person to another. We all believe that the
internet
 is mostly good for communication, but some people suggest that it may not be the best place to get
information
. So,
this
 essay will discuss these two views.
To begin
 with the
first
 view, communication becomes much easier than in the past. In the past, if you want to call someone in another place, you will have to write a letter and send it by postbox, and it will take a long time to arrive.
By contrast
, these days it is much simpler to talk to someone away millions of
kilometers
a metric unit of length equal to 1000 meters (or 0.621371 miles)
kilometres
 like if he is in front of you. By just one click you can read his words, hear his voice, and even see his face. Regards the
second
 view, the
internet
 has many users. So, they can easily publish hundreds of
information
 in two minutes. Because of
this
, the
internet
 is not always a reliable source to take
information
 from. We are not sure if the publisher is a child or an adult, has a good intention or not, and even if he is sure
from
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of
 his
information
. To conclude and from my point of view, I
am completely agreeing
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completely agree
 with the above statements. The
internet
 is good for
communicate
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communicating
 and to take
information
 from.
However
, we must make sure that the webs where we take
information
 from reliable sources.
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