You stayed at your friend’s house when you attended a conference in Australia. Unfortunately, you left a large envelope with some important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: thank your friend for the stay describe where you left the envelope ask him/her to return it to you by post

Dear John, I am writing
this
letter with great pleasure that
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reached my home town back
last
week and to thank you for the extended hospitality served at your place. I can still feel the fresh environment and awesome food provided by your family, which always remain unforgettable till my
last
breath. As you know, I was very worried about my flight and in a hurry
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the
last
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. Due to
this
rush, I forgot my envelope, which carried important documents in the same bedroom where I slept
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period of
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. I am Highly thankful for your great help,
otherwise
attending a business conference in a foreign country while sightseeing, visiting fun places and explore the major cities of Australia would be a
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task for me.
However
, In the excitement and happiness, I missed my envelope, which is red in colour from
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and have my office project files, degree certificates and identity cards. Needless to say, my office project files are the most important ones and the only reason for me to attend that conference, which I need in
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2 days to showcase our project to get the contract. I think you can smell, the sense of urgency and importance of that envelope which
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left in the cabinet of the bedroom where
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put my bag and clothes during the stay. I hope you will find it and send me by express delivery as soon as you get
this
letter. I will send money for the delivery fee and try to pay back
this
courtesy in the future when we met again. Warm Regards Salvatore
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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