Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views give opinions

People have different views about children should start their formal education as early as possible or delay it

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up to, before the time

until

they are at least

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years old. Personally, I would contend that the

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of

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is the best

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for children to attend

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. On the one hand, earlier education for children is beneficial for them in numerous aspects.

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, since at the

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of two or five is great

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for children to start learning a

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languages

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language

, sending children to preschool that children have more opportunities to acquire new languages.

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means that children could enhance effortlessly language through a wide

rang

change or be different within limits

range

of activities

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as games or music and playing with native speakers.

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, most Hong Kong children could speak fluently three different languages – Putonghua, Cantonese and English, because they are exposed to

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a diversity

the diversity

of languages from an early

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.

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, by entering kindergarten earlier, children have more time to engage in activities at

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, which enables them to satisfy their curiosity about the world or develop both socially and intellectually.

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, I am more convinced that at the

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of

seven

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is the best

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for children to enter their formal education. The primary reason that commencing

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at the

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of

seven

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that children will become more mature and integrate more easily into the educational

enviroment

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

.

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means that

chidren

a young person of either sex

children

could absorb academic knowledge, and children would be

equiped

provided or fitted out with what is necessary or useful or appropriate

equipped

with soft skills

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as communication or teamwork skills.

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,

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helps to foster all-

arounded

in the area or vicinity

around

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children’s development. Another reason that apart from mandatory subject, music and sport classes provide

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an environment

environment

with children to expose their potential talents In conclusion,

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it is often believed that sending children to

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at a very early

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bring a lot of benefits for children.

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, I am strongly convinced that the best

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for children entering

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is

seven

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year olds.