Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people believe that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime To what extent do you agree?

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I think that setting more
detective
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on the
street
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is reduced for a minor
crime
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, but other crimes have to need another way measures. Nowadays, the crimes are artful and several. The minor
crime
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is,
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, pick pocket, snatch and vandalism. Their punishment is not strict to compare with murder,
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a greater number of people that are a minor
crime
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.
Moreover
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, the minor
crime
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is not easy to arrest the criminal at that moment, because it does not take a long time to have made the
case
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, it may take a time to done few seconds to a few minutes. In
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case
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, setting more
detective
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on the
street
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is good for preventing the
case
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. The
detective
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could stand at many points
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likely to occur a
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and could patrol around in a city. The people take warning if the
detective
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would be set there.
On the other hand
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, other
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,
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, murder, bank robbery and internet fraud do not affect that setting
detective
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in the
street
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. Because, a murder and a bank robbery would be planned, they are not an impulsive action. Their
case
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is difficult to prevent by
detective
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before they have done it.
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, the internet fraud is difficult to prevent too, they would do
crime
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online and it does not matter whether
detective
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stands in the
street
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.
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, if the
detective
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increase for setting on the road, another
case
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would be increased. They would not afford to work for another
case
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. In conclusion, setting
detective
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more on the road effects for reducing a minor
crime
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, but another
case
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might be increased. I think it is not the only way that sort out all of
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.
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