Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people believe that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime To what extent do you agree?

I think that setting more
detective
on the
street
is reduced for a minor
crime
, but other crimes have to need another way measures. Nowadays, the crimes are artful and several. The minor
crime
is,
for example
, pick pocket, snatch and vandalism. Their punishment is not strict to compare with murder,
therefore
a greater number of people that are a minor
crime
.
Moreover
, the minor
crime
is not easy to arrest the criminal at that moment, because it does not take a long time to have made the
case
, it may take a time to done few seconds to a few minutes. In
this
case
, setting more
detective
on the
street
is good for preventing the
case
. The
detective
could stand at many points
that is
likely to occur a
case
and could patrol around in a city. The people take warning if the
detective
would be set there.
On the other hand
, other
case
,
for example
, murder, bank robbery and internet fraud do not affect that setting
detective
in the
street
. Because, a murder and a bank robbery would be planned, they are not an impulsive action. Their
case
is difficult to prevent by
detective
before they have done it.
Also
, the internet fraud is difficult to prevent too, they would do
crime
online and it does not matter whether
detective
stands in the
street
.
In addition
, if the
detective
increase for setting on the road, another
case
would be increased. They would not afford to work for another
case
. In conclusion, setting
detective
more on the road effects for reducing a minor
crime
, but another
case
might be increased. I think it is not the only way that sort out all of
case
.
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