Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people believe that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime To what extent do you agree?
I think that setting more
detective
on the street
is reduced for a minor crime
, but other crimes have to need another way measures. Nowadays, the crimes are artful and several.
The minor crime
is, for example
, pick pocket, snatch and vandalism. Their punishment is not strict to compare with murder, therefore
a greater number of people that are a minor crime
. Moreover
, the minor crime
is not easy to arrest the criminal at that moment, because it does not take a long time to have made the case
, it may take a time to done few seconds to a few minutes. In this
case
, setting more detective
on the street
is good for preventing the case
. The detective
could stand at many points that is
likely to occur a case
and could patrol around in a city. The people take warning if the detective
would be set there.
On the other hand
, other case
, for example
, murder, bank robbery and internet fraud do not affect that setting detective
in the street
. Because, a murder and a bank robbery would be planned, they are not an impulsive action. Their case
is difficult to prevent by detective
before they have done it. Also
, the internet fraud is difficult to prevent too, they would do crime
online and it does not matter whether detective
stands in the street
. In addition
, if the detective
increase for setting on the road, another case
would be increased. They would not afford to work for another case
.
In conclusion, setting detective
more on the road effects for reducing a minor crime
, but another case
might be increased. I think it is not the only way that sort out all of case
.Submitted by amour.une.fleur10 on
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