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Some believe that it is parents who should teach their children to recycle waste while others feel schools are more responsible. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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Every day, people throw away tons of rubbish into landfill sites. Human
waste
 is the greatest threat to the planet,
therefore
, recycling and reducing
waste
 is the essential thing that human
can
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humans
a human
do to avoid
further
 damage. Some people think that schools should teach their stude
nt abou
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students
t recycling and avoiding
waste
, while others believe that parents should be responsible for teaching their children about
this
.
This
 essay will discuss both points of view. On one hand, many might see the role of teaching children about recycling as belonging to teachers in school.
In other words
, teachers can explain the benefits of recycling and the drawbacks of misuse more efficiently.
Furthermore
, schools have specific subjects, which explain the damage done with the
waste
 and what can be done to reduce it. Schools can be of great value in teaching the importance of recycling and reducing misuse.
On the other hand
, recycling
waste
 is a habit that needs to be formed and it takes time. Children learn through observing adults,
for example
, they see their parents separating out plastic, glass and paper for recycling, they far more likely to adapt that habit themselves than if they are just told about it in school. In conclusion, teachers and speac
ific subj
(sometimes followed by 'to') applying to or characterized by or distinguishing something particular or special or unique
specific
ects in schools can be beneficial for learning about recycling and
waste
, while parents can practically demonstrate how to reduce
waste
. In my opinion, both view
are
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views
equally important for a child.

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