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Studying

at university in your

hometown

where your family lives or studying at university in a different

city

far from your family. Most students struggle while making a choice between studying in their

hometown

or studying in another

city

. Sometimes

this

can be confusing for the student. Both the choices have their own positives and negatives, which the essay will discuss. Studying university in another

city

teaches people a lot,

such

as how to cook, how to manage money etc. Absolutely can be more free than study in

hometown

. You will be more independent and grown. Acquired these personal skills will be helpful in future problems.

Besides

these advantages, there are some disadvantages

such

as friendship relations, cultural differences, accent of different

city

On the other hand

, There are many advantages where studies in

hometown

. You don’t need to rent a house

Accept space

cook a meal and give the money to transportation in

this

way you can save money.

Also you

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Also, you

can find a job easily. You don’t have to adapt to own

city

Although

Suggestion

Despite

these advantages, there are some disadvantages.

For instance

, you will still under your parents’ rules when you are staying with them and you cannot learn how to live single-independent of the family.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

204 words

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studying at university in your hometown where your family lives or studying at university in a different city far from your family.

Fully explain your ideas

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