The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The given graph and table illustrate

the

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apply

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Japan's

population

data in the past,

recent

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and recent

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,

and

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as

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also

with

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the possible expectation

in

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for

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the future. Meanwhile, the table elaborates elder

population

who

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aged 65

years

or over and the rate of it compared to all

population

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populations

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in the

years

1950, 2005, 2035,

2055

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and 2055

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.

Overall

, in 1950, the numbers of all society were only 84.1 million,

in addition

to it, the percentage of 65

over

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individuals

were

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4.9 %. There was a stable

increasing

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increase

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in every 5

years

, eventually

to

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with

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exception

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the exception

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2000

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in 2000

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.

Then

this

year, the rising continued for

next

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the next

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5

years

. Surprisingly, from the beginning of 2005, the

population

has started to decrease. The most significant change is skyrocketing of the old people's percentage. After

the

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2005, elders were almost 1 out of 5 people in the total

population

. There have will

supposed

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to eliminate

to

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rise, so

all

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population

have

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will be revealed as a prediction

approximately

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of approximately

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90 million in

the

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2055.