The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1
The given graph and table illustrate
the
Japan's Correct article usage
apply
population
data in the past, recent
, Correct word choice
and recent
and
Correct word choice
as
also
with
the possible expectation Change preposition
apply
in
the future. Meanwhile, the table elaborates elder Change preposition
for
population
who
aged 65 Correct pronoun usage
apply
years
or over and the rate of it compared to all population
in the Fix the agreement mistake
populations
years
1950, 2005, 2035, 2055
.
Correct word choice
and 2055
Overall
, in 1950, the numbers of all society were only 84.1 million, in addition
to it, the percentage of 65 over
individuals Change preposition
apply
were
4.9 %. There was a stable Change the verb form
was
increasing
in every 5 Replace the word
increase
years
, eventually to
Change preposition
with
exception
Correct article usage
the exception
2000
. Change preposition
in 2000
Then
this
year, the rising continued for next
5 Correct article usage
the next
years
. Surprisingly, from the beginning of 2005, the population
has started to decrease. The most significant change is skyrocketing of the old people's percentage. After the
2005, elders were almost 1 out of 5 people in the total Change the article
apply
population
. There have will supposed
to eliminate Change the verb form
suppose
be supposed
to
rise, so Fix the infinitive
apply
all
Correct determiner usage
the
population
have
will be revealed as a prediction Unnecessary verb
apply
approximately
90 million in Change preposition
of approximately
the
2055.Change the article
apply
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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