People say that watching major sporting events like the Olympics and World Cup encourages adults to participate in exercise why some says that there are other better ways of making adults exercise. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Now-a-days
excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
is
important factor
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an important factor
for human beings. Olympics and
world
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cup
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helps to people to do
excercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
as well as there are other ways to do
excersice
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
exercises
. In
this
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essay discuss
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essay, discuss
about both view how
olympics
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the Olympics
Olympics
olympics'
olympic's
and
world
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cup
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help humans and other ways.
Olympics
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The Olympics
is
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are
world
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sports which always encourages adults as well as children.
Also
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olympic
of or relating to the Olympic Games
Olympic
and
world
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cup
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game which played for
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country
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the country
. That game gives us to chance to present our
country
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. These all
games
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game
players play for exercise as well as competition purpose. Because of those games we present out
country
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and, If our
country
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win
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wins
we get
benefies
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the benefits
benefits
. So Olympics and
world
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cup
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we play as
a
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an
exercise we get
proudness
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. And we get a chance to play in national and international team. But it is not necessary to watch
olympics
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the Olympics
Olympics
and
world
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cup
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for encouragement adults. Because all peoples are not interested in sports. Some people do yoga, dance and other things as well to do exercise.

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