In many countries, the tradition of families having meals together is disappearing. Why this is happening? What will be the effect of it on family & society?
Having meals together with the family members is a
tradition
that is
becoming invisible bit by bit in many countries. There have been many reasons behind it and this
essay will explicate those problems and it's
impact on personal and social life.
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
First
of all, family size, a factor that affects tradition
, differs from the ancient period. Nowadays, a family consists of not more than five or six members where single parents live w
ith their children. Whereas, there were more than one family lived jointly in same house earlier and they used to dine together. From time to time, It's noticed that members of a family are separated from each other and bonding is not good. Parents are sometimes reluctant to accustom their children to having meals together that leads negative attitude towards the family and make them unable to ungrudgingly express opSuggestion
were single parents living
were single parents live
have single parents lived
inion w
ith each other. Suggestion
an opinion
Moreover
, another cause of breach of tradition
is, people like to take their meals outside without the family members while staying at office or institution for working or any other purposes . H
aving laAccept space
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f better understanding and responsibility, it became a trend to have meals and enjoy with family in a restaurant. Mainly the youngsters don't try to feel the positive effect of the involvement in Suggestion
a lack
tr
adition t
hat escalates their relationship with family members and friends and Suggestion
the tradition
also
motivate to perform social activities.
In conclusion, the problems, which have greater impact on idiosyncrasy of a family, should be resolved as far as possible. Although
the mentality of the family members has yet to be changed, people can promise to eat together to amplify the tradition
of having meals together and creating some new way of attracting the members to keep it up.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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