The line chart illustrates the amount of money in US dollars paid on cars in China, Vietnam, Thailand, and Indonesia from the years 1995 until 2005.

The line chart illustrates the amount of money in US dollars paid on cars in China, Vietnam, Thailand, and Indonesia from the years 1995 until 2005.
The line chart illustrates the
amount
of money in US dollars paid on
cars
in China, Vietnam, Thailand, and Indonesia for the years 1995 until 2005.
Overall
, the
amount
of money spent on
cars
in all four countries had increased. China had the highest
amount
over the entire period,
while
Indonesia started the lowest but dramatically increased. Thailand remained relatively stable over the given period. China spent within a range of around $80
million
and just $90
million
from 1995 to 2003, the largest
amount
of money spent on
cars
in all four countries. Vietnam placed the
second
-highest
started
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at just above $50
million
in 1995 and
experienced
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experiencing
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a consistent increase year after year until 2005 to just above $70
million
. Indonesia started the lowest,
spent
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spending
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$30
million
in 1995 and the
amount
had
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increased by around $10
million
in
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from
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1999 to 2001 before a tremendous rise of just over $60
million
and just above $70
million
in 2003 and 2005, respectively. Thailand's expenses on
cars
shifted within the range of around $50 and just above $60
million
from 1995 until 2005.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • line chart
  • amount of money
  • paid on cars
  • China
  • Vietnam
  • Thailand
  • Indonesia
  • 1995
  • 2005
  • significant increase
  • highest amount
  • steady growth
  • lowest overall spending
  • started at
  • doubled
  • nearly
  • reached
  • exceeded
  • among
  • half a billion dollars
  • conclusion
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