The line chart illustrates the amount of money in US dollars paid on cars in China, Vietnam, Thailand, and Indonesia from the years 1995 until 2005.
The line chart illustrates the
amount
of money in US dollars paid on cars
in China, Vietnam, Thailand, and Indonesia for the years 1995 until 2005.
Overall
, the amount
of money spent on cars
in all four countries had increased. China had the highest amount
over the entire period, while
Indonesia started the lowest but dramatically increased. Thailand remained relatively stable over the given period.
China spent within a range of around $80 million
and just $90 million
from 1995 to 2003, the largest amount
of money spent on cars
in all four countries. Vietnam placed the second
-highest started
at just above $50 Wrong verb form
starting
million
in 1995 and experienced
a consistent increase year after year until 2005 to just above $70 Wrong verb form
experiencing
million
.
Indonesia started the lowest, spent
$30 Wrong verb form
spending
million
in 1995 and the amount
had
increased by around $10 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
in
1999 to 2001 before a tremendous rise of just over $60 Change preposition
from
million
and just above $70 million
in 2003 and 2005, respectively. Thailand's expenses on cars
shifted within the range of around $50 and just above $60 million
from 1995 until 2005.Submitted by caseres.a on
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