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IELTS 'modes of travel' answer The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. m Average distance in miles traveled per person per year, by mode of travel

IELTS 'modes of travel' answer The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. m Average distance in miles traveled per person per year, by mode of travel
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The table illustrates the average distance travelled in
miles
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 per person by different modes in England between 1985 and 2000.
According to
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 the table, there has been showing a negative trend in the style of transport
such
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 as walking and bi-cycle
where
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whereas
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 there has been a positive trend rest of the modes of transportation. The average distance travelled
by
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per person
through
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by
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 walking, bicycle, car, local
bus
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, long-distance
bus
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, train, the taxi has increased in 2000 as compared to the
year
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 1985. The period
of
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apply
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1985, the walking style of travelling was 255
miles
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while
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 it
had
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decreased
18
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by 18
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miles
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 in the
year
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of
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apply
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2000. During the period of 2000, the bicycle condition of travelling had decreased by an average of 10
miles
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 as correlated to the
year
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 1985.
On the other hand
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, the
car
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car's
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 condition in travel increased at a significant rate in 2000 as compared to the
year
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 1985 and it is the most popular fashion of transport. But the usage of the local
bus
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 had
been
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increased in 2000
at
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to
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 155
miles
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 as correlated to the
year
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 1985.
Moreover
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, a few people use the bicycle and most
unfamiliar
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are unfamiliar
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. In the contrast, the usage of the long-distance
bus
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,
train
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trains
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,
taxi
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taxis
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 and other modes of travelling has risen
at
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to
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 approximately 80, 77, 29 and 135
miles
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 in 2000 as correlated to the
year
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 1985.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words miles, bus, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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