IELTS Writing Task 1: 'modes of travel' answer The table below gives information about changes in modes of travel in England between 1985 and 2000. m Average distance in miles traveled per person per year, by mode of travel

The table illustrates the average distance travelled in

miles

per person by different modes in England between 1985 and 2000.

According to

the table, there has been showing a negative trend in the style of transport

such

as walking and bi-cycle

where

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there has been a positive trend rest of the modes of transportation. The average distance travelled

by

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per person

through

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by

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walking, bicycle, car, local

bus

, long-distance

bus

, train, the taxi has increased in 2000 as compared to the

year

1985. The period

of

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1985, the walking style of travelling was 255

miles

while

it

had

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decreased

18

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miles

in the

year

of

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2000. During the period of 2000, the bicycle condition of travelling had decreased by an average of 10

miles

as correlated to the

year

1985.

On the other hand

, the

car

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car's

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condition in travel increased at a significant rate in 2000 as compared to the

year

1985 and it is the most popular fashion of transport. But the usage of the local

bus

had

been

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increased in 2000

at

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155

miles

as correlated to the

year

1985.

Moreover

, a few people use the bicycle and most

unfamiliar

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are unfamiliar

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. In the contrast, the usage of the long-distance

bus

,

train

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trains

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,

taxi

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taxis

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and other modes of travelling has risen

at

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approximately 80, 77, 29 and 135

miles

in 2000 as correlated to the

year

1985.