Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the advantage and disadvantage of tourist who visits such places?

The importance and popularity of global travelling have grown over the past few years

due to

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development and accessible transportation. Experts throughout developing and developed worlds have debated whether the

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number of visitors has an outweighs benefit or not. Both sides of

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issue will be examined in the following essay. On the one hand, there are three crucial advantages of

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. The most important one is

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protection. An extensive study by

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university has illustrated that more pollution and garbage stem from visitors which destroy the wildlife habitat. Consistent

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line of thinking is health and safety concerns.

Due to

the fact that some attractive spots are the place where dangerous animals live,

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, supervisors are being able to effectively take care

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a tiny group of travellers.

Last

but not least, some

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that the newcomers might shape and invade the traditional culture.

On the other hand

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although

there are ample positives,

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multifold negatives cannot be denied. First and

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foremost, limited visitors cause limited growth of the economy. The best example

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this

is that when the country receives the slower nation's income,

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opportunity

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to use those monies to generate

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further

benefits

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society,

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as

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transportation or electricity systems. Another drawback that should be taken into consideration is a lower level of job creation. When the newcomers are restricted to sightseeing,

then

the foreign customers are

also

reduced

also

reduce, especially restaurants or national parks.

To conclude

from the aforementioned arguments, I strongly agree that

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cons of travelling difficulty outweigh its benefits.

However

, I would recommend

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those sides because too many conditions or too much freedom might have an impact in one way or another

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