Discuss about the person you dislike and the causes why you detest. Also, name 3 virtues

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People behave and think differently due to their upbringing, parenting and social environment. We despise or love each other in the way they behave. In
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essay I will discuss the reason why I dislike one of my classmates and
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his virtuous characteristic traits.
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with, I personally hate the people who deride and make fun of someone who is small, weak or disabled. And he has a manner to intimidate a person who is weaker than him and be bossy towards them. He enjoys feeling powerful.
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Therefore he
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Therefore, he
gets a feeling of pleasure at other's misfortune.
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, he ripped a girl with milder forms of autism down and told her bluntly that he didn't like her. He repeats
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action, even if he knows beforehand that he is going to hurt her.
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Moreover he
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Moreover, he
doesn't have feelings of remorse for his action which is more humane.
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Furthermore he
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Furthermore, he
has a trouble controlling his anger and causes him to do things he will regret later on. He gets upset about something so trivial and say hurtful things to people in the heat of the moment. For
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reason, he tends to resolve conflicts through aggression without considering the likely negative consequences. But to give the devil his due, he
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has virtuous qualities.
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, he has an outgoing personality which allows him to express his idea without difficulties or shyness.
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Therefore he
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Therefore, he
makes friends and find his foot easily.
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, he is a consistent person who fully dedicated himself to his goal.
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but not least, he is likely to tell people what he thinks straight. Being direct and voicing one's idea is an important skill to have.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • antipathy
  • detest
  • animosity
  • disdain
  • repugnant
  • arrogant
  • dishonest
  • reprehensible
  • estrangement
  • malicious
  • conflict
  • integrity
  • empathy
  • altruism
  • patience
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