The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The illustration provides information about the process of collecting current and reliable
weather
forecasts and then
broadcasting this
to mass people which are conducted by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology.
As can be seen, this
process needs some equipment to gather news forecasts and three main sources, such
as satellite, radar, and the drifting buoy is
used for collecting Unnecessary verb
apply
weather
information.
To begin
with, the satellite is used to capture images of Australian weather
from the outside of the planet. Meanwhile, radar can give screen pictures while
a drifting buoy which
is placed on the sea Correct pronoun usage
apply
reveals
a synoptic chart of the Australian climate.
Wrong verb form
revealing
Subsequently
, all of the information is analysed to know the real weather
condition in Australia. After that, these data are put on the computer to prepare the report for the public broadcast. People will know the weather
forecasts in Australia through various media, in particular
, TV newsreader
, radio, and recorded announcementFix the agreement mistake
newsreaders
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