Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

Thesedays
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These days
, people
prefers
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prefer
to talk only a few languages. A
segements
one of several parts or pieces that fit with others to constitute a whole object
segments
segment
of people believe that
leraning
the cognitive process of acquiring skill or knowledge
learning
a different languages are not so worthy because life is more convenient with fewer languages.
However
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
think
this
is a good idea to some
extent but
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extent, but
it
also
has
bad side
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a bad side
too.
This
essasy
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
will explain below.
To begin
with, it is
inarguabel
against which no argument can be made
inarguable
that
number
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the number
of languages are
disapering
the act of leaving secretly or without explanation
disappearing
in
this
modern
days
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day
.
somehow
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Somehow
,
Accept space
,
it
is making
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makes
our life easier in many ways.
First
and foremost, one might can easily travel
whole world
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the whole world
without any hesitation and insecure.
For instance
,
english
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
language
is
a
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an
international
language
and it is taught in every part of the country
.
Accept space
.
As a
results
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result
, there may be only a few people who
doesn't know
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don't know
this
language
otherwise
others can easily speak or
atleast
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at least
understand it.
As a
result people
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result, people
are migrating each day from one country to another easily for
differnt
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
purpose. Along with
this
few languages bring
world
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the world
closer to closer and it will develop the feeling of one if they understand each other
languages
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language
. While,
this
is only possible if there are few
language
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languages
because
it
it is
it's
not so easy to learn several languages.
on
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On
the other hand,
language
is just not a word for
any
quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity
some
people. It is treasures given by our ancestors which is
pride
Suggestion
the pride
of nation. No people can easily give up their
language
just to make their life easier. There are still some real patriotic masses who won't let their
language
disappear.
Also
, it may create

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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