Life has become much more stressfull compared to our parent’s generation.As a result stress related illnesses are increasing around the world.Why is stress such a problem in the modern world and what do you think can be done to overcome the problems caused by stress?

Nowadays
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,
stress
has become a serious
problems
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problem
than it was in the past.Many different diseases are caused by
stress
over the world.In today's
world people
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world, people
are asking themselves why
stress
is
such
an issue and how can we deal to overcome
this problems
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this problem
these problems
.
This
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an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
will
doscuss
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
discus
discussed
about the
stress
related illness and solutions to
deal these problems
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deal with these problems
. In
this
modern era,
stress
can bring a lot of consequences among them one is it is harmful to one's health and
wellbeing
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well being
. To illustrate, chronic diseases
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sleep disorders
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strains relations, depression
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anxiety
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loss of self esteem cause tension
in person life
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in a person's life
in person's life
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For example
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One of my
uncle
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uncles
is a
businessman he
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businessman, he
every time thinks about
making
engage in
doing
his business best and earn money always focus on work and take
alot
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a lot
of pressure of his work due
this
he even can't sleep properly at night time and has
disorder
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a disorder
the disorder
. One of the key to
stress
free life is management of tension
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There are various techniques to deal with the pressure like changing of lifestyles
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diet
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yoga
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meditation
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identifying
stress
and take a break from
stressors
the relative prominence of a syllable or musical note (especially with regard to stress or pitch)
stress
. But every person has their own way to relief strain.
For instance
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when
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
have a lot of tension
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
like to meditate and sit
alone but
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alone, but
during
stress
more my brother like to watch
movie
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a movie
movies
the movie
. To sum up,Life has become more stressful for our generation than parents generations and thoughtful measures could be taken to address
this
issue including strong relationship,engagement in activities and working smarter than harder

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