The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates the number of utilization of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2003
Overall
, the consumption of fish decreases slightly between 1979 and 2003, the usage of Lamb declines substantially and despite some fluctuations
where the consumption of chicken grows drastically and though some fluctuations
, the usage of Beef reduces significantly and notwithstanding some fluctuations
and a single spike.
According to
the graph, the number of utilization in fish starts recording approximately 55 grams
in 1979 and after that, there are some slight changes in in-between years and finally
reduces in 2003. The figure for spending Lamb kicks-off
at 150 Correct your spelling
kicks off
grams
and decreases quickly to around 85 in 1982, shows some fluctuations
between years and reduces finally
.
On the flip side, the usage of chicken is beginning at just under 150 grams
and grows significantly over the period, until it reaches at
under 250 Change preposition
apply
grams
. The consumption of Beef starts at approximately 210 grams
, after that, a spike shows between 1980 to 1985, some fluctuations
and decreases from 1986 to 2000 and finally
reaches just under 100 grams
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