The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The graph illustrates the number of utilization of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2003

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, the consumption of fish decreases slightly between 1979 and 2003, the usage of Lamb declines substantially and despite some

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where the consumption of chicken grows drastically and though some

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, the usage of Beef reduces significantly and notwithstanding some

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and a single spike.

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the graph, the number of utilization in fish starts recording approximately 55

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in 1979 and after that, there are some slight changes in in-between years and

finally

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reduces in 2003. The figure for spending Lamb

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at 150

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and decreases quickly to around 85 in 1982, shows some

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between years and reduces

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. On the flip side, the usage of chicken is beginning at just under 150

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and grows significantly over the period, until it reaches

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under 250

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. The consumption of Beef starts at approximately 210

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, after that, a spike shows between 1980 to 1985, some

fluctuations

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and decreases from 1986 to 2000 and

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reaches just under 100

grams

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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187 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

consumption trends
steady increase
most consumed meat
relatively stable
general decline
pronounced decline
over the years
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