The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The graph illustrates the number of utilization of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country from 1979 to 2003
Overall
, the consumption of fish decreases slightly between 1979 and 2003, the usage of Lamb declines substantially and despite some
fluctuations
where the consumption of chicken grows drastically and though some
fluctuations
, the usage of Beef reduces significantly and notwithstanding some
fluctuations
and a single spike.
According to
the graph, the number of utilization in fish starts recording approximately 55
grams
in 1979 and after that, there are some slight changes in in-between years and
finally
reduces in 2003. The figure for spending Lamb
kicks-off
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at 150
grams
and decreases quickly to around 85 in 1982, shows some
fluctuations
between years and reduces
finally
. On the flip side, the usage of chicken is beginning at just under 150
grams
and grows significantly over the period, until it reaches
at
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under 250
grams
. The consumption of Beef starts at approximately 210
grams
, after that, a spike shows between 1980 to 1985, some
fluctuations
and decreases from 1986 to 2000 and
finally
reaches just under 100
grams
.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "finally".
Vocabulary: Replace the words fluctuations, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreases" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reaches" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reduces" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption trends
  • steady increase
  • most consumed meat
  • relatively stable
  • general decline
  • pronounced decline
  • over the years
  • throughout the period
  • depicts
  • span
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