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Some people think that it would be better if the whole family (uncles, aunts and grandparents) are involved in bringing up children rather than only parents. What is your opinion?

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It is thought by a few individuals that children grow up better in their
life
Suggestion
lives
, if he or she spend
life
 in joint families compared to the one’s in a nuclear family. I profoundly agree with the former part of the statement, as upbringing in the joint family is more effective, because the major reason behind it is that there are family members to teach them in their adolescent age from the experiences they have children will learn the values and traditions and other important aspects of
life
.
Firstly
, the joint family plays a pivotal role in developing their brain,
hence make
Suggestion
hence makes
 the children strong to face any obstacle in any field of
life
. As grandparents have their own experiences to share and protect the children in many different ways, while telling their stories of how their parents were brought up and how challenging it was to raise kids as parents and uncle & aunts
also
 do help children to learn new ways of making things easier and helps to understand the real challenges to face in
life
 so that they can come out with flying colours and can stand in the front row in
this
 competitive world. The other clear thought to live with joint family is that children have a broad mindset for taking challenges,
for example
, if someone in the family is retired from the Army, so he has many stories to share from his experiences how fearless, brave and adventurous these real stories would make them strong and bold to fight with any circumstance. To conclude, at the
last
the superlative of 'little' that can be used with mass nouns and is usually preceded by 'the'; a quantifier meaning smallest in amount or extent or degree
least
 we come to the conclusion that one should live in joint family if it is possible as it opens lots of opportunities for the children to come out with bright colours and reach the pinnacle in every aspect of their
life
.
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