The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown in the diagram.
The given diagram explains how
sun emitted
energy gets trapped in our atmosphere Add a hyphen
sun-emitted
due to
the greenhouse
effect
. It is evident that logging of trees and fossil fuel driven
vehicles worsen the Add a hyphen
fuel-driven
greenhouse
effect
.
Getting back to the details, sunlight that reaches the earth
surface creates Change noun form
earth's
heats
and a large portion of Fix the agreement mistake
heat
this
heat was supposed to radiate back to Space without any hindrance. However
, this
is not the case and a great proportion of heat energy remains on earth due to
different greenhouse
gases. Though some sunlight is reflected off our atmosphere for the presence of the white cloud in the sky, a large portion of the heat created by sunlight rays do
not leave the surface. Tree logging is a reason for Correct subject-verb agreement
does
enhanced
Correct article usage
the enhanced
greenhouse
effect
as less tree means less absorption of CO2, which is the main gas of greenhouse
problem. Another aspect that enhances the average surface temperature by contributing to Correct article usage
the greenhouse
greenhouse
phenomenon is Correct article usage
the greenhouse
the
fossil fuel. Correct article usage
apply
This
fuel is used to run different water and Highland vehicles and is responsible for the increasing emission of carbon dioxide gas. It is evident that to reduce the average temperature which is basically generated by the greenhouse
effect
, we need more trees and less use of fossil fuels to drive our cars and ships.Submitted by weeracha.fern on
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