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( Do you agree or disagree with the following statement : It's a good idea to send homework assignments for students during summer breaks) examples and reasons.

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Homework has always been a controversial topic, but when it is assigned over
summer
 breaks, it can spark even more debate. If you ask me about my perspective on giving the student assignment on the hol
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an indispensable matter
nly their psychological health but
also
 their physical activity.
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students who have assignments on their
summer
 breaks tend to have an unsteady mood unlike the student who spend their
summer
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to reinforce the bonds of the family so that some homeworks are not that much precious to waste it.
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education t
 that issue, we will obviously see that giving tasks to the scholars on
summer
 holidays,
on the contrary
, will not keep their brains sharp as teachers anticipate. In reality, kids typically get more than enough homework during the rest of the school year. As a matter of fact, recent researches indicates
that elem
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entary students are often given three times more homework than what is recommended by the National Education Association. Surprisingly to the educational system , by taki
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 a mental breather, kids may be more apt to return to class recharged and ready to learn. For all that, I completely disagree with the idea of assigning the students any tasks on holidays.
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