Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. Discuss both and give your opinion.

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It is known that humans negatively affect flora and fauna or our planet. The common view on
this
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toppic
the subject matter of a conversation or discussion
topic
is divided on those who
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
believed
believes
the situation can
change
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, and those who don't. My view on it is, that we can definitely make a difference. Some people think that we
can not
can not
cannot
change
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ourt
of or belonging to us
our
path of destroying the nature, because in their vision there is no other road.
Morover
in addition
Moreover
the one in which we just use all resources and pollute everything. It is thought that industry in the future won't be able to
change
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to that extend.
On the other hand
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, there
is
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are
those who contradict
this
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theory and I am one of those.
Firstly
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, a lot can be done with
renevable
that can be renewed or extended
renewable
removable
sources like
wind mills
a mill that is powered by the wind
windmills
, recycling processes,
puryfing
serving to purge or rid of sin
purifying
the water,
eg
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.
Secondly
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, there should be a sustainable plan for all the fields of industry. I think, if we put, well being of the all living creatures and that they should have an advantage in front of the capitalism and profit,
than
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
we should be able to put less negative
preasure
the force applied to a unit area of surface; measured in pascals (SI unit) or in dynes (cgs unit)
pressure
pressures
on the environment. In conclusion, even if it is
belived
accept as true; take to be true
believed
beloved
by many, that devastation which humans have on Earth won't
change
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in
future
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the future
, me and many more think
otherwise
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. We as a human
rase
any competition
race
need to start thinking in the way of sustainability for a brighter future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • negative impact
  • extinct
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • habitat destruction
  • mitigate
  • reverse
  • stricter regulations
  • protected areas
  • endangered species
  • education and awareness campaigns
  • biodiversity
  • consequences
  • renewable energy sources
  • organic farming
  • eco-tourism
  • environmental regulations
  • sustainable practices
  • natural ecosystems
  • preserve biodiversity
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