The diagrams below show the site of school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and making comparisons where relevant.
These two maps illustrate the
school
site in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school
site in 2024.
Overall
, the construction layout of the school
site would have some
undergo noticeable changes in the future years.
In 2004, after entering the main entrance, it is Correct quantifier usage
apply
easily
to Replace the word
easy
found
a Wrong verb form
find
path
separate
Wrong verb form
separating
the
Correct article usage
apply
school
building 1 and school
building 2. And keep walking alone
the Correct your spelling
along
path
, we can approach the sports filed
.
But it has a big difference in 2024, a passage which used to connect two original buildings would be added and the Correct your spelling
field
path
would be cut off by this
passage. At the end
of the path
, the sports field would be replaced by a school
building 3. At the right of the
Correct article usage
apply
school
building 3, it
will set up a new Correct pronoun usage
we
car
parking place and get a newly
Replace the word
new
path
to connect the
Correct article usage
apply
car
park 2 and the old car
park. What’s more, near by
the Change preposition
apply
car
park, a new sports field would be established which smaller
than the Add a missing verb
is smaller
last
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words school, path, car with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "changes" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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