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Olympic games very very important and respected in the past. However, some people say that technological improvements have reduced the importance of Olympic games in this 21st-century do you agree or disagree with this

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Olympic games
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The Olympic games
 are admittedly a divine arena where sports luminaries from different parts of the world united together in a single platform to exhibit their best performance for their mother country. Even though some people ascertain that technological innovations have faded the significance of
this
 particular event in the current century, I strongly stand against
this
 statement.
To
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Two
 comments, the importance of
Olympics
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the Olympics
 is still at the peak,
this
 could be evident from the competition among various nations to host Olympic meets. At the same time,
this
game
has became
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has become
 a prestigious arena in order to showcase the extravagance, economical stability as well as hospitality of a particular nation.
For example
, China spent almost 2,000,000
crores
 to set up Olympic village in Beijing in 2014.
On the contrary
, some people argue that technological improvements
has been taken
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has been taking
 a heavy toll on the games, but it is extremely a false view because as the technology increases, so does the technicality in the event.
For instance
, many countries including America and Australia has developed new sensors and electronic chips not only to monitor but
also
 to assess the performance done by the sports stars. Another point worth considering is that in one go
,
Accept space
,
Olympics in turn
aids to
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aids, to
 ease out international tensions between states, flourishes tourism or industrial sector and many more. To conclude what I perceive from
this
 context is that all the Olympics is a
game
 which had
orginated
come into existence; take on form or shape
originated
 in Greece
before two centuries,
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, two centuries before
 the glory of the
game
 is still there.
Therefore
, it is apparent that the reputation of the
game
 must be there in the future, till the world ends.
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