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I want to meet with Orhan Pamuk. He is one of the most well-known Turkish authors. He was nominated for
Nobel Literature Prize
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the Nobel Literature Prize
, and he was awarded with it. His books were translated into many different languages, and they are still sold all over the world. I want to meet him because he is very good at writing. He knows how to attract readers. He is very good at portraying people and places. You don't realise how time passed while reading his books. His characters are so alive, and they are as if they were living in the real world. I want to know how he is able to achieve all these. I know that he was graduated from a journalism school and that he worked as a journalist for a while.
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, his brother is one of the most famous lecturers in economics in Turkey. I think the books which are
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 fantasy and adventure genre are the most popular books among children because children like adventure and fantasy. They want to get away from the real world while reading a book. I think some children just get bored easily while reading a book, and they,
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, don't want to read books. They are attracted to other hobbies which require less effort. Teachers and parents can state that children have a very good verbal skill which can help them in many ways in their lives if they have a habit of reading. Children have to pass exams to enter a good high school or university, and these exams are time-limited, so if they have an ability to read at speed, it can help them in these exams
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, lawyers need to read a lot because they deal with their defenders' legal issues, and these defenders ask them to solve those. To reach a solution, lawyers need to read cases
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, and later they need to search out related legislations, and all these require reading much. I think it depends on a
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's unique characteristics. If a
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 takes pleasure from learning new and interesting information,
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 is very likely to prefer to read factual books rather than novels.
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, if a
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 likes to read just for emptying his/her head, it is likely that
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 chooses novels rather than factual books.

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