The chart and graph below give information about participants who have entered the Olympics since it began. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The bar chart provides information about the

number

of male and female

athletes

in the Olympics

while

the line graph just illustrates about

number

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of

participants

. Both the chart and graph show

participant

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participants

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who entered the

Olympic

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Olympics

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from 1924 to 2012.

Overall

, both the

number

of male and female

participants

rocketed significantly. We can notice that there is a massive difference between

percentage

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the percentage

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of male and female

participants

. Looking at the bar chart it is

apparently

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there are considerably more

paeticipants

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participants

is

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male than female. The

number

of male

participants

in the Olympics was about 3000 in 2004,

being

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higher than

female

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females

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by approximately 2990 people. We can see that

female

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hardly entered the Olympics in 1924 and 1952, the

number

of female

athletes

in 1924 and 1952 respectively is about 100 and 500. The

number

of female

athletes

continued to have a

dramatical

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increase

from 1984 to 2012, was about 1500

participants

in 1984 and went up to about 4800

athletes

in

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the end of

ther

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the

their

period

.

However

, the

number

of male

participants

is

increase

considerably to almost 4500 in 1952 and

coutinued

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continued

continue

to go up to the end of

period

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, hitting a high point of about 5900 in 2012, just being higher than female

athletes

by approximately 1100 people. The line graph shows a steady

increase

through the

period

, from 2500

atheles

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athletes

in

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the beginning to 11000

participants

in the

years

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2012. The most dramatic

increase

is the

period

between 1984 and 2012

,

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when the

number

of

athletes

rose from about 6200 to 11000

in

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the end of the

period

.