The graph below shows the number of university graduates in Canada from 1992 to 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph illustrates the number of males and females who graduated in Canada between 1992 and

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2007 in the regular interval of two.

Initially

, the

women

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women's

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graduation counts

were

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steadily increased from nearly 100,000 in 1992 to 105,000 in 1995. After that, it started slowly dropping from nearly 1996 to 2001 by approximately two

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and

then

it rose sharply

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over the

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; meanwhile, it remained relatively stable in 2004. With regards to male graduates, tally with almost 70,000 in 1992 and

then

it gradually increased by around a count of 5000 within 2.5 years. From 1998 to 2002

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considered

fluctuation

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period

and

then

it substantially increased over the

period

.

Overall

, the number of

males

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male

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graduated

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counts outnumbered the female counts throughout the

period

whereas

both

genders

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gender's

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individual

timeline

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showed similar fluctuation.