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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion .

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There are some people supporting the opinion that countries should not spend their funds on railways and they have to develop existing facilities and old public network.I side with those who opine that dedicate some proportion of budget to extend the railway network and make new ones is essential.
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, it is thought by many that our old transportation system should be developed and we need to renovate old buses and trains and use them again. Since it helps governments to save their money and spend that on more important matters,
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 encouraged governments to economize energy resources
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 it leads to decrease the of CO2 emissions.
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, some people, including me believe that there are some significant reasons which obligate governments to expand public transit system.
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, railway enlargement encourages people to use trains or metros,
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 it helps governments to gain a lot of money and use that on some vital issues.
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, conveyance development helps the environment to fight with air pollution and those kinds of smokes, which exit from cars and automobiles by burning fuels in their engines.
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, if the railway lines expand,
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 the percentage of traffic jam and congestion in metropolitan will be decreased. In conclusion,
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 some people think old railways should be reused, I think it is necessary for expanding public transit and convey system because it has a lot of advantages
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 it is beneficial for our city that provides easy access to everywhere.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • efficient
  • congestion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • connectivity
  • economic growth
  • public transportation
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