The only way to solve the increasing crime rate Of young offenders is to teach parents better parenting skills. To what extent do you agree?
In the recent years, the crime rate has reached at
top
and become an alarming issue in all over the world. Suggestion
the top
Sohme
experts believe that only parents should teach to their children leave the crime, which they can Suggestion
Some
held
to increase. Suggestion
hold
However
, I disagree with the given statement. Because both teachers and the government should also
playing
vital role in youngster's life. I Suggestion
play
wotuld
like to explain my views in the below paragraphs.
To start with, parents are the past tense of "will"
would
first
teacher of children. They teach to their children what type of friends makes, wearing clothes and much more. Because of this
, parents can help to reduce the offenders in society. For example
, parents want to see the bright future of their children. Whgich
is impossible to Suggestion
Which
sehe
in crooks. In many times, their children respect the guardians of parents. perceive by sight or have the power to perceive by sight
see
Thus
, the number of lawlessness should destroy.
On the flip side, the gyovernment
and teachers are very necessary for protecting children. the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
Firstly
, children most of the time spend in schools with their tutors. They learn many things from them regayrding
their life. with regard or relation to
regarding
Secondly
, all nations gof
the world are developing with many different methods. connects a noun with the preceding word
of
Such
as technology, which enhances the violation rate. Toddlers tend to watch felony programs and playj
action games. participate in games or sport
play
plug
Therefore
, I deem that the authorities should be banned croosk
shows in both ygames
and television.
To conclude, despite the rise of crime rate, there can be many solutions vanish it. All people have an equal responsibility to a contest with rules to determine a winner
games
rednuce
cut down on; make a reduction in
reduce
this
as soon as earlinest
.(comparative and superlative of 'early') more early than; most early
earliest
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