You recently went to a concert and thought one of the singers was very good. You want to tell how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter: • say how you feel about his/her performance • give details of your music-related activities • explain how you would like him/her to help you with your music-related activities

Dear

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Hopkins, My name is Kao Mao. I have been listening to you for three years and

last

week I attended your concert at the Barclays Premium Center. I am writing to express my delight about

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performance that will never be forgotten as well as to ask

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advice. Needless to say that it was a brilliant and breathtaking performance where I was mesmerized by all songs. I had been dreaming about seeing your performance live and

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week was one of the best moments in my life. I have been playing

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guitar since I enrolled in a music academy.

Next

week I am going to take an exam which will decide whether I am ready to perform in front of a large audience or not. I can imagine how you are busy with concert tours, but I would be appreciative if you share some advice to help me to become more proficient in

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field. Your experience and knowledge would be helpful for me to pass an exam, and even more, to achieve the highest results in music. Thank you very much for your contributions to the music world. Yours faithfully, Kao Mao