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Some People believe that the higher a product is priced, the more likely it is that people will want to buy it. To what extent does price influence potential buyers? What other factors influence people to buy a product?

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Nowadays people are getting habituated with the branded products.
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, few people believed that
high
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the high price
price
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on
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of
 products will create
good impression of
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a good impression of a product
a good impression of product
product
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 in
people
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peoples
mind
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.
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, I disagree with the previous statement. My opinion and other factors which can affect the people’s buying decision is explained in
ensuing paragraphs
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the ensuing paragraphs
. High prices create
the good
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the best
best
 image in
people
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peoples
’
mind
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primarily but
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primarily, but
 if
quality
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 is not as per
expectation
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the expectation
 of
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customer
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customers
the customer
, they will not buy it
second
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 time. At the end of
day
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the day
,
customer
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 wants
proper return
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a proper return
 on the money they have invested which can be fulfilled only by providing good
quality
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. In contrary, it is
righly
with honesty
rightly
 said that company who are charging more
price
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 can expend more penny for
provision
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the provision
 of qualitative goods or services. There are multiple aspects which can affect the decision of
buyer
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a buyer
the buyer
buyers
 to purchase the products other than
quality
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 and
price
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 of products.
Firstly
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, income capacity influences the
customer
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 which
product
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 they can afford.
Secondly
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,
advertisement
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the advertisement
 is major factors in creating
impression
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the impression
an impression
impressions
 of products in public’s
mind
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. To exemplify, through advertisement, people can have
clear image
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a clear image
 of
product
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,
usefulness
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the usefulness
 of that
products
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product
, etc.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
 To cap it all, higher
price
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 can induce
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customer but
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customer, but
 the factor which plays
major role
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a major role
 is
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quality
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the quality
 of that
product
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. And other secondary aspects
also
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 affect the customers.
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,
company
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companies
the company
a company
 should make
strategy
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a strategy
 and
price
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 its
product
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 with keeping in
mind
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 all the aspects.

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