Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
These days people show more interest in visiting places of extreme weather conditions, right from the Sahara desert, which is one of the hottest, uninhabitable places on earth
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the Antarctic region, which is one among the coldest. Suggestion
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The motivation to pay a visit to remote, harsher conditions are many. Linking Words
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an onerous task and successfully completing it, people get a sense of achievement and pride. Linking Words
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helps them to believe in themselves and makes them tougher to face any unexpected and difficult situations in life. Linking Words
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, tourists prepare offbeat locations as they are less crowded than the popular tourist destinations. These locations not only help people to find Linking Words
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teach survival skills which could come handy in all walks of their life. Linking Words
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, people who prefer solitude, tend to visit places like the Himalayas where they could meditate and rejuvenate themselves. Linking Words
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, these pristine locations which are untouched by the human race become more polluted due to an increase in activities.
To conclude, an increased traffic to places with extreme weather conditions comes with a cost. Those who are prepared well Linking Words
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...