Climate change is an issue. Do you agree with this?

I am working in a
university
as a research assistant. I am working in a state
university
which is called as Medeniyet
University
. I wanted to spend time doing
researches
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research
about public
law
because I like especially constitution
law
, so I preferred to enter into the academy. I don'
t
think my
job
is very popular in Turkey. People who
graduates
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graduate
have graduated
are graduating
from a
law
faculty generally prefer to become a lawyer. I like my
job
because I like both doing research, writing and reading. I am okay with them. Actually, I am not very friendly to people who I don'
t
know very well. I keep a certain amount of distance from them. I felt a little stressed on the
first
day of the
job
because I didn'
t
know anybody at the
university
, and it was my
first
"real"
job
. I mean I had worked before, but all of them were part-time and temporary jobs. I do
researches
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research
about my area. I sometimes write articles related to my area and sometimes help more senior academics to search for a topic on which they want to write an article. I
also
assist
more senior lecturer
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more senior lecturers
during classes. I help them supervise students during exams. I wouldn'
t
want to change my
job
, but I would prefer to work in a more prestigious
university
. I am planning to work as a research assistant, but I
also
want to improve myself academically,
therefore
I want to stay in Europe for a while. I am studying public
law
in Istanbul
University
. I partly like my hometown, but it has many drawbacks,
such
as traffic, overpopulation, environmental issues. I am from Istanbul, and I am living there. It is a very historic
city
. It was the capital of two great empires. Bosphorus passes through the
city
, and it has,
therefore
, a very beautiful view. It is a very big
city
, and actually it is like it is a distinctive country. Its population is over some European countries. I am not totally sure about. It should be the Hippodrome columns which date back to
Byzantine time
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the Byzantine time
. There are many activities to do as a foreigner in the
city
. Actually, even a week may be inadequate. A foreigner can visit many historic museums and historic buildings, s/he can taste many tasteful different dishes. S/he can experience the nightlife of the
city
. The traffic problem would be solved. The
city
's overcrowding problem would be solved, and
also
the
city
is not multicultural. The
city
would be an attractive
place
for people from all over the world. It has changed dramatically. In the recent past, there were many free green spaces, but now it is hard to see a free space in the
city
. Buildings were built everywhere in the
city
. I think it is better compared to the past.
In
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At
the present time, we have more developed subway lines and an improved train line, and there is a good connection system between different transportation systems.
On the other hand
, the motorways in the
city
went worse. There are more traffic congestions during daytime on the motorways. I don'
t
think the
city
would be a very good choice to bring up a child. There are many disadvantages of starting up a family in the
city
.
Firstly
, rental fees
are
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is
high in the
city
, so unless both partners do work and earn well, it is hard to maintain a life in the
city
.
Also
, there are very few places,
such
as recreational areas, parks, so it is not preferable to bring up a child. My home is located in the Asian side of the
city
, in Maltepe. It is not far from the
city
centre, and it is a preferred district to live in of
this
reason. I live in a flat. It is not easy to live in a
house
in Istanbul. You should have much money to buy a
house
. I am staying with my family.
Therefore
, I don'
t
need to pay a rental fee or household bills. There are enough rooms in our
place
. There are separate rooms for every person in our
place
. My favourite
room
is my
room
because it is large enough for me, and it has a balcony. The sun's rays enter into the
room
throughout the day.
Also
, no one is allowed to enter my
room
without permission. The walls are weakly decorated. No painting is hung on the walls. The walls were only painted in a plain colour. We have a terrace, but we have no privacy here as
apartments
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the apartments
are so close to each other. I would have a terrace where we have privacy. I do not plan to live there because I want to start up my own life by leaving my family. There is a sports
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
10 minutes away by walk from my
place
. There is a park and recreational area almost 25 minutes away by walk from my
place
, and
also
there is a mall very close to my
place
, where you can go to the cinema. My neighbourhood is a good
place
. Resident are generally respectful people to the environment and other people. It has a small park where people can go and have a rest. It has two different family health
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
, so you can see a doctor without the need to go to a large hospital. People are generally animal lovers. There are many stray cats and some dogs which are fed and cared by the residents. In big cities, it is a privilege to live in a
house
because you need to much money to buy a
house
in these places.
On the other hand
, it is easier to live in a
house
in rural areas because affording to live in a
house
is not that hard.

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