A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in locals newspaper. Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter Explain what you are currently sowing Describe your suitability for this area of work Say when you can attend an interview

Dear sir or madam, I am writing to let you know that
i
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just read your advertisement in
news paper
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newspaper
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about job openings and I'
m
interestid
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interested
in
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waiter job
waiterjob
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the waiterjob
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which you have in your
restaurant
.
Currently
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I'
m
involving in
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field in 9 wonder
hotel
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. Let me explain my situation. I'
m
student
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a student
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and
dowing
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doing
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party
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time job. Your
restaurant
is very near to my place. So if you give me chance it's easy for me to reach
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yore
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restaurant
when you want. I'
m
working in
this
profession
from
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for
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last
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the last
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2 years. Due to
this
reason
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I have enough knowledge about everything and I
also
passed
certificate
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the certificate
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exam to work in
restaurant
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a restaurant
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. I'
m
also
expert
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an expert
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in deal with
costumer
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the costumer
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. Would you kindly manage your time for
interview
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an interview
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then
I'
m
available
in
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any time expects Monday and Thursday because I have college on that day
.
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Thank you for your consideration
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Your
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faithfully RUSHI

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  • thirdly
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