Some people believe that environmental problems can be solved by increasing the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, pollution
increased
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has increased
rapidly, which creates the environmental issue, but people of our countries are not thinking about it's damaged our lifestyles.A segment of
group
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the group
a group
think
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thinks
that climate changes react our routine system
also
a big issue by using of cars, so when fuel cost quickly it's price
then
definitely we can get solution
accurelty
with few mistakes
accurately
.
other
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Another
Other
group of people
believe
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believes
that when we will use other vehicles
instead
of cars after we get satisfaction in routine lifestyles. But, I agreed with a
second
statement
also
justify my answers
fiollowing
about to be mentioned or specified
following
flowing
paragraphs.
First
, I would like to talk about how to save our environment?
how
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How
to frequent changes in our lifestyle?
how
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How
to people misused their money,
they
of them or themselves
their
impact on our systems?.There three
kind
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kinds
of environmental problems creates,
such
as water, soil,
polution
undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities
pollution
. The pollution is a major issue behind
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
natural environment.
when
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When
we used
offen
many times at short intervals
often
open
even
vehicles that they reacts in our bodies.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
we have no shortage of
time
, either we used vehicles for going one place to another place, but we wastage our salaries 1/3
th
definite article
the
portion of using vehicles. Secondary part
discuss
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discusses
with more
tramsporstion
used
of
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on
by
cars, as per my view I think
car
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the car
must be allowed for riding 3-4
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(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
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a time
the time
times
we used it's a single person, while none of the any requirement that
time
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go out
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of
its
the thing named or in question
it
.Car is flexible, comfortable and
also
costly, despite of we do not
stopped
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stop
its usually. In conclusion,
environmetal
of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings
environmental
problems
on
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of
impact earth's living people
,
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,
so we aware and less used of vehicles.
some times
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Sometimes
Some times
, we have lack of
times
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times, then
then
we
want
change location; move, travel, or proceed, also metaphorically
went
out for buying some things and other routine
purposes that
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purposes, that
time
the walking distances,
although
we take vehicles
for
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to
in
quickly return.
so
to a very great extent or degree
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by
vehicles.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental sustainability
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • public transportation
  • carbon footprint
  • economic incentives
  • alternative energy vehicles
  • fuel-efficient
  • government subsidies
  • economic disparity
  • urban planning
  • rural infrastructure
  • sustainable development
  • carbon tax
  • green technology
  • demand elasticity
  • energy conservation
  • climate change mitigation
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