Currently, there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective and at worst, may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree or disagree??

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Presently
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the use of
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medicine
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is gradually taking root in the health care system.
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, these methods have been thought
of to be inefficient
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to be inefficient
and harmful. I completely disagree with
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school of thought as
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forms of
medicine
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have shown to be essential. In my opinion
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,
alternative
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and conventional methods of
treatment
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should be used together. One of the reasons people are often dismissive of the use of
alternative
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medicine
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is because there is little or no
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evidence to
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back up
its efficacy. According to a
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done by Okon E.
Okon
a city in northeastern Ohio; the heart of the United States rubber industry
Akron
in 2016 on 'The efficacy of
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medicine
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', it was reported that
alternative
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drugs lacked
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research
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backing to support its efficiency.
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, it's not readily prescribed by physicians
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Another reason could be that
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forms of
treatment
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are often self prescribed by consumers. Due to the recent rise in self medication, people now prescribe drugs with little or no knowledge of drug interactions, in essence, complementary
medicine
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like herbs sometimes interact with conventional drugs causing more harm than the good it was intended for. Notwithstanding, there are benefits to the use of
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medicine
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, one of which is the fact that it is free of side effects. Complementary and
alternative
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medicine
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that
are made
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is made
from herbs are completely free from adverse effects due to the non- toxic nature of plants as they are naturally occurring unlike the conventional method of
treatment
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.
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, a conventional drug like Diclofenac prescribed for pain causes nausea and vomiting as side
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effects, but
in the case of
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forms of
treatment
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,
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is different.
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,
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forms of
medicine
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tends
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tend
to treat the root cause of the disease condition than merely treating symptoms.
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, the chiropractors treat the root cause of any
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condition which is
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to
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the popular practice
of managing symptoms
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with
conventional
medicine
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. In essence,
alternative
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medicine
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is both effective and harmless. To sum up,
alternative
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medicine
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when compared to that of the conventional is effective and less dangerous and should be used more often by clinicians. I strongly suggest that
alternative
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medicine
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be used
along side
side by side
alongside
conventional
medicine
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as
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would improve the quality of life of patients.
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