some people prefer to spend their lives doing same things and avoid changes. Others, however think that change is always a good thing. Give a reason to answer and include any relevent examples from your own knowledge experience.
Some people prefer to doi
ng th
e same things in their whole Suggestion
do
be doing
have done
life
instead
of change
for more interesting as other believe. From my view, I love to change
myself in positive ways and become the best vision of me and that is
the reason why I want to find something new and do it.
On the one hand, there are some behaviours that we need to maintain due to these will be good for our health. For example
: read book ev
eSuggestion
a book
the book
ryday, d
o exercises, do meditation or travel one time per every year. Suggestion
every day
This
all things can improve your health, your lifestyle better day by day. And we need to keep doing optimistic activities like that, do not need to change
.
On the other hand
, try something different will show you more experiences, you can get a fascinating life
. Instead
of read th
e same genre of booSuggestion
reading
k, l
et’s Suggestion
the book
books
change
to other to
pic; still do exercises but in a brand new creative way. Travel can give you knowledges about the place where you go, let’s go to more countries any of various alternatives; some other
another
instead
of just go around in Vietnam. For example
, you can live like the way you want to live: wake up, go to school during 8 hours, come back home and go to the extra classes, go home to do the homework and then
go to bed. This
chain of actions repeat ev
eryday and make you feel borSuggestion
repeats
ed but yo
u do not want to Accept comma addition
bored, but
change
because you lazy or shy. Whatever the reason is, you are wasting your time to have a meaningful life
.
In the conclusion, if there is the thing you know that is
good for yourself keep going, but if you feel there is something wrong or bored in the way you go through it, change
it. We just live one time, live a meaningful life
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite