Women can do everything that men can and they even do it better. They also can do many things that men cannot. But it is a fact that their work is not appreciated as much as men’s, although they have to sacrifice a lot for their family and career. It is said, A woman’s place is in the home. What do you think?

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Women and men have had different roles in the community since the beginning. Under modern pretexts these differences are slowly converging.
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, due to the genetic inheritance and
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relating to human society and its members
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-demographic components, these differences do exist.
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, men are undoubtedly better adapted genetically to perform physical tasks.
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, the assumption that women can match men in everything is clearly flawed. The difference between their physical abilities is clearly demonstrated in the sporting arena. Take,
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, the Olympics or any international sporting event. It can be clearly seen that in these competitions the genders are separated due to inherent differences between the sexes.
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, it has been argued that women are less appreciated in
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due to their traditional roles in the home.
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statement is true to a certain extent because it largely depends on the
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. In certain traditional societies in Africa, females working is frowned upon and is seen as neglecting the family, whereas in Afghanistan, in general, females are allowed to do little else but stay at home, being a housewife.
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a woman’s value is largely dictated by the
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, culture and history.
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, to state that her place is in the home is widely considered sexist in modern western societies. To conclude, differences do certainly exist;
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, these are largely through nature.
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, the role women may have is usually dictated by other factors,
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, not ability.

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