Many people believe that counties should produce food for all population eats and import food as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether we are ought to endure with negative circumstance or fi
ght a
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the fight
gainst with it and even find the solution to overcome it has been widely discussed around people. Some may hold that when we are physically di
sable,
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disabled
we have to learn to live with it
instead
of twisting unchangeable situation while others argue that as fa
ilure o
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a failure
c
curs
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occurs, such
such
as fa
il o
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a fail
n ex
am,
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the exam
we are better to find st
rategy t
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a strategy
the strategy
o sort it. As far as I am concerned, the latter one would be my primary choice whenever I met bad situation as I believe humans are capable to solve any difficulties they confronted. Physical disabilities have been frustrating people and some may be irreversible physical disabilities. As re
sult,
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a result
those who in
this
condition should accept that and find wa
y t
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a way
ways
o live with. Anyone who couldn’t bear with that and find it unacceptable would be hard to enjoy their life. Take Beethoven
for example
, after realizing that he be
come a
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becomes
deaf, Beethoven, as a professional musician, thought it was too hard to accept at
first
.
However
, he came up with wa
y t
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a way
ways
o live with
this
bad sickness, challenge himself, and brought the famous symphony No.9 to alive in the end.
However
, when we confront with failure,
such
as failed on exam, we are ought to make am
endment o
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amends
n our previous strategy
instead
of directly accepting fail in midway. We are often gi
ving u
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given
p on making ef
fort o
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the effort
an effort
r trying to come up with ne
w strategy a
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a new strategy
new strategies
s tackling with the difficulties which may have beaten us for several ti
me,
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times
but we will never know that the success is actually cl
ose t
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closer
o us and it’s possible to make it in our
next
try. For illustration, before Steve Jobs invented the
first
smart phone, he had been suffering harsh criticism from not only the public but even his own working partners.
Nonetheless
, he took those blaming and fa
ilure f
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failures
or granted, he turned those into advices and
finally
introduce world with his revolutionizing invents. How to deal with seemly dim conditions has been widely discussed in our society. When we meet circumstances that are hard to make
fu
rther change,
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further changes
a further change
we are supposed to endure with that and find ways to live with. Meanwhile, if we find those difficulties are possible to make change with, we shouldn’t give up easily even we have encountered several failures already. In my opinion, I agree with those who choose to ameliorate previous situations rather than doing nothing with that bad si
tuations.
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situation
From the experience of Steve Jobs, I realize that no matter how worse the situations could be, one’s should always try their best to improve where they are.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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