The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.

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produced by energy resources which exploit from the ground.

It is clear that

the diagram has five distinct stages.It can be seen how the cold

water

changes

water changes

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during processes and

at the end

of the

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an electricity generator and turbine

contributes

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to

produce

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electricity. Looking at the first and

second

stage, give us information about cold

water

pumping into the ground at 4.5 km deep straightly.

Subsequently

water

currents out of hot stones where is in the ground, in geothermal site, after that when the

water

temperature rises the hot

water

driving out by a pump. At the

last

station, it is noticeable that the hot

water

vapor

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push

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into a place where a turbine

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by the powerful

water

steam, afterwards produces use

the

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geothermal energy and

transform

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it into electricity which does not hurt ecosystems and our environment because it avoids burning fossil fuels.