Many people believe that today there is a general increase in anti-social behaviour and lack of respect for others. What might have caused this situation? How to improve it?

It is ill-fortunate that when we are moving very fast and making vast progress in every field
also
there is a rapid growth in the anti-socialism behaviour and most of the people are forget respect for others.
However
, In
this
essay we tend to analyse the certain consequences those are affecting the behaviour issue and how to ameliorate the situation.
Nevertheless
, today we live in an era of technology in which the whole Earth has shrunk and becoming a global village.At present, time is moving very swiftly and reciprocating people
also
. It is like a race against time and due to the impact of the busy life schedule normal humans are away from their social involvement.
In addition
, nowadays, most people are connected through telephones or an internet.
For instance
, a very vast use of Wtsapp, Facebook and Instagram application is affecting their own social life. Undoubtedly, they are connected to everyone via these apps, but these are only virtual things that are dragging away from social activities.In reality, people are getting less intellectual and
also
believe in
face
to
face
interactions.
Thus
, It is undeniable that
this
is
also
a factor that making the people anti-social.
Furthermore
, families are becoming shorter day by day.In
this
modern century, most of the people prefer a nuclear family
that is
short and less member in one family. Both parents are having jobs and they go out for work and children left unattended there at home with video games and internet.Due to the loneliness most of the children those who are living in the nuclear family, they spend their most of the time on a screen because there is no one available to supervise them about other outdoor activities and as well as about participation in other activities that helps them in changing attitude towards others. There are many solutions of
this
problem.
To begin
with
,
Accept space
,
people have to learn how to make a proper balance between professional and personal life.
Moreover
, the government should
also
the workers per daily minimum working hours by
this
they can spend some good pace with their families after duty.
Secondly
, people have to minimise the use of the social platform for conversation
instead
of
this
they have to spend more hour in
face
to
face
interactions and
also
try to participate in the group activities. Summing up, antisocial behaviour and mutual lack of respect in today's stage can be dealt with by taking simple measures, and individuals and government should collectively these steps.
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