some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty,while say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it must be stopped .discuss both views and give your opinion.

Economic
growth
is a significant
play
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player
role behind that higher rate.Some people believe that economic
growth
depends on goods and services,
also
the best way of people, which living below poverty and they have no more money for buying some important things of routine life.Another group of people thinks the economic
growth
is damaged, our
environment
so do not more used it.I agreed with
second statement
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the second statement
, but do not think it, I discuss both views.
Firstly
, the more benefit of reduced the rate of
economy
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economic
.While we have been known all people and thinks all about our nation and poor people
then
we will reduce development.Recently, India has no more technologies,
skiled
having or showing or requiring special skill
skilled
workers, educated people as compared to other nations.To
example with
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example, with
government employees, When our infrastructure, high rate of tax impact on lifestyle of poor people, because servants may be flexible to pay their tax reason of their more salaries.
Some times
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Sometimes
poor people, which do not satisfied with their job and contracts.But
,
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,
they must be paid their taxes,
although
a shortage of money.
Second thing
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The second thing
, the great support of goos and services to create more income of their business.I support the
environment
issue behind of growths.To exemplify with foreign people, while tourist come to visit our country historical places that time they give more tickets
instead
of local people, so it's greatest effect on our
environment
,
although
our government does not give proper rules and regulations for foreign tourists.So they widely affected on our
economy
rates.So I think the government should proper planning for tourists. To conclude, development of recession great effects on goods
also
services, but some consumers depend their salary.When the company gives more passed more budgets for
projects
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projects, then
then
they live better life.
Furthermore
,
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,
when the advancement of our
economy
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
its effect on our
environment
condition,
although
we have nothing opportunity to save our system.So as per my suggestion rapidly back to
growth
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the growth
of
economy
and a wake up too.
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