People shopping habits depend more on the age group they belong to than other factors. To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

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In today's world
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Individuals shopping habits have been increasing in recent years due to the availability of new products in
market
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the market
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Shopping habits
is mostly influenced
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are mostly influenced
by the age group they belong
to rather than other
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rather than other
factors
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I partially disagree with the given
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statement, however
however
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every coin has two
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sides, so
sides so,
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take
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there are
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a plethora
of relevant factors on which shopping habits of people
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are depending
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One of them is gender
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Most of females like to do shopping as compared to males
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For
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In our survey it is found that 60% of online shopping
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are done
by women and 40% of online products purchased by men
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therefore
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Therefore
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percentage
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the percentage
of females are more than males
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Another factor is that shopping habit
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also depends
also
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depend upon
income
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the income
of the family
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Rich class people buy many products to fulfil their luxurious and basic
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needs, whereas
impoverish people people opine twice before purchasing low price products due to death of financial resources.
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on the other side shopping habits of
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depend upon
different age group
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a different age group
of human beings
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The little aged children
for instance
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are always looking for toys
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as cars and dolls
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while
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While
adults get tempted towards fashionable clothes and new gadgets available in
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market, moreover
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senior citizens like to purchase comfortable and religious books
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Therefore
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it is possible to classify shopping habits of people according to their ages
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To
recaptulate
summarize briefly
recapitulate
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it is
irrefustable
impossible to deny or disprove
irrefutable
that folks shopping habits based on their age group even though there are more
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumption patterns
  • digital natives
  • e-commerce
  • brick-and-mortar stores
  • target demographic
  • disposable income
  • consumer behavior
  • market segmentation
  • purchasing power
  • retail therapy
  • brand loyalty
  • impulse buying
  • price-sensitive
  • cross-generational
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