The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
The 1st pictorial
diagram
represents the present situation of the Islip town centre and 2nd
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the 2nd
diagram
presents its development in the future.
Overall
, there will be a dual carriageway round of
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this
city, build up a new car park, a new shopping centre and a bus station in the future. However
, the size of every construction will be increased as compared to previous
.
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the previous
According to
the 1st diagram
, the town is as close to its countryside in the north direction. Moreover
, there are a total of 16 shops in the position of west-east. There is a main road that divides the town into two portions in the direction of the
east to west. On the south side, there are some areas for housing and in front of the main road, there is a school.
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According to
the 2nd diagram
, the main road will be transformed into a dual carriageway, and the number of shops will be decreased. However
, some new housing areas will be induced in the northeast, south, and beside the carriageway.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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